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Highly symbolic and allegorical piece
This exquisite poem about the dilemma of creativity, of an artists yearnings and aspirations, of the meaning of the very vocation he effortlessly professes, deep, overpowering, boundless and requires much skill and has a mystical aura around it yet fulfilling at the end, giving unexpected joys ...the artist is hapless and perhaps overburdened as a vessel, but in the end lucidly admits the superiority of his gifts.
The poem is well structured, succinct,symbolic and resonates with modernist innovations. The title is evocative and the allegory is but openly hidden which adds charming effects to the overall beauty of the poem.
This exquisite poem about the
This exquisite poem about the dilemma of creativity, of an artists yearnings and aspirations, of the meaning of the very vocation he effortlessly professes, deep, overpowering, boundless and requires much skill and has a mystical aura around it yet fulfilling at the end, giving unexpected joys ...the artist is hapless and perhaps overburdened as a vessel but in the end lucidly admits the superiority of his gifts.
The poem is well structured, succinct, symbolic and resonates with modernist innovations. The title is evocative and the allegory is but openly hidden which adds charming effects to the overall beauty of the poem.
the persona
the persona is a woman
it is a woman talking about a man and his prowess to make her better than she is before ....
i like this poem
it sounds like a poem written after a good night with that perfect some body
You had it coming. Dodge
You had it coming. Dodge
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A poet taking a swipe at another poet? How sweet.
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...or at himself...